All the jammers wanted to win this battle not lose!there where 8 million phantoms and 4 million jammers Mira knew what she would to if things got too bad but she kept it a secrate.........for now. After 7 hours of fighting 1 million jammers where left and 6 million phantoms. the 8 remaining jammers in the secrate cave felt very guilty for not fighting
and went out to fight. Mira knew it was time, she stood on a hill watching the phantoms closely. give up yet? mocked one of the phantoms. Mira didn't answer she just stared at the phantom.
She tried to look calm outside but inside she was full of anger. With one powerfull flap she rose over the surface and started qhirling her wings rapidly. Mira became a big clue tornado whirling towords the phantoms. NO! screamed the phantom the tornado-that-was-
mira destroyed lots of phantoms but suprisingly even if it did fly by one of the jamaasians it didn't hurt them. Mira's wings stopped whirling and she collapsed to the ground exhausted.
she stood up and flew away and dasappeared. the jamaasians where safe once again and
on that night it was party,music and fun.
THE END!
Tuesday 18 June 2013
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Yay! You did the part three! Great story!
ReplyDeleteYAY ^.^!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved the end so much ^^! Your great at writing stories btw c:!
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