Chapter one (continued)
** 4 months later **
Of course, Greely grew up as a normal pup and the mark eventually faded.
It was a cloudy day, and the sun was peeking out of the clouds like a round, silver circle.
Greely and Lupa where in the nursery, play-fighting.
"How dare you tresspass the Misty Timberland Pack's territory?!" Lupa growled playfully.
"YOUR territory? Well this is MY territory!" Greely replied.
They both lept at each other, Lupa pinned down Greely - play-biting him.
"I win! I win!" Shouted Lupa.
"Hey! That wasn't fair, you only pinned me down! I could still have thrown you off!" Greely said angrily.
"Yeah, but whoever pins down gets the win." Lupa replied.
"That wasn't what it was last time we played!!"
Greely shouted.
Greely shouted.
"Oh and guess what? You should stop GLOATING over your skills, I only won five times and four of them because you LET me win!!"
"Greely! It's only a game . . Greely please, im sor-"
Greely's purple swirled mark glowed, and there was an explosion of smoke and darkness - which of a huge amount hit Lupa.
"Greely?!"
"What's happening to me?! Im turning into a shadow!" She shrieked.
Check back tomorrow for chapter two!
:O I CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAPTER TWO!!!!
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