Sunday, 7 July 2013

Greely's story

Most of us know Greely the wolf shaman but one knows his beginning nor where he got his dark powers.. 
 
Chapter 1


It started back in those days when Greely was just a ordinary pup in an ordinary pack. Greely was play-fighting with his older brother. Greely's mother had died so Sir jake had to take care of Greely. Greely and his brother continued play-fighting happily when shadows blocked the entrance of the cave. dad whats going on? asked Greely curious and worried. i don't know but whatever they are i know there going to cause chaos, i have to battle Greely.



 But why dad why do you have to? because its my job as the alpha male, to protect the pack. but will i ever see you again? Sir jake signed. i can't promise. He jumped into battle with the strange shadows.
                                              *10 minuets later*


NO! Greely cried looking at his father corpse. WHY DID THIS HAVE TO HAPPEN??!! he put his head on his father sobbing, whatever had done this had to pay. After a few minuets later he looked up. he knew there was nothing to do his brother had dissapeared too. He carried his fathers body to his cave and buried him, he planted an Oak sapling to mark where his fathers body was buried. after a few hours he told the alpha female and once again a new alpha male was chosen, the alpha female Moon chose a wolf called Talon to take care of greely. Greely grew older and stronger everyday and so did the sapling. Greely grew up to be a strong handsome wolf but whenever he looked at the Oak it reminded him of his father.



 One night Greely was walking in the forest in silence he saw a big eye. it was a bit familiar and reminded him of something. the Shadow pounced from his place attacking Greely. Greely remembered that those where the same shadows that had killed his father, He ran towords it and clawed it but missed. the shadow disappeared then zapped him with electricity OUCHH! Greely punced at the shadow biting it but it was no use the shadow kept dissapearing.

 then he felt something strange inside him but he didn't know what was it. he suddenly pounced at the phantom shooting dark magic at it as if his body had a mind of its own. what is going on? thought greely i have powers? the dark magic nerarly destroyed the shadow, Greely shot dark magic again at the phantom and it dissapeared. another shadow apperared and this time a huge one, Greely wasn't sure if he could defeat this on but he would try.

Chapter 2



Greely sent a cloud of dark magic to the shadow. No,nothing happened. Greely tried again, still nothing. the shadow sent lighting bolts at him they shot him in the chest and Greely collapsed to the floor. Greely tried to get up but his shoulder was badly injured the shadow was coming towards him, he tried to run with 3 legs but fell again. he managed to sit up and send a huge big powerful cloud of dark magic, coming towards the shadow this time it worked but the shadow wasn't defeated yet, it sent a giant lightning bolt, Greely swiftly dodged, he ran towards the shadow and clawed it with his sharp white claws. the shadow dissolved into black dust then into a shadow.

Greely walked in the woods his pawsteps were silent. he looked at his shoulder to find that it was made out of mist. suddenly every part of his body had become mist. is this a dream? he looked towards the pines. between them he could see a light shining, he walked towards it and inside it when suddenly he felt his body take shape, his wound was gone in his shoulder. but still, he was half a shadow. suddenly a heron made out of light landed next to him, i have been looking for you, Greely she said. who are you and how do you know my name? i have been watching you, Greely you belong here in Jamaa. Mira took Greely to coral canyons. Greely stood on the red sandy soil, he knew what he was, a shaman. Greely built himself a cave and carved his father on the door to remember him. 

Years passed, Greely was walking through Jamaa reading the news, it said a new game was here, Best dressed and was located it coral canyons. it showed a picture of the game right in front of his father carving. Greely teared the newspaper with anger and looked at his fathers carving, hidden by a game symbol. they'll be very sorry, very sorry indeed thought Greely. No one knows were Greely lives now, he lives someplace far away in the lands that doesn't belong to Mira.

The end

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  1. I have my own Greely Story!

    The Story of the Diamond Shoppe
    By Ibp911

    A long, long time ago, A young wolf pup was born. He was born into the wolf pack Aurora Borealis. It was a sweet spring day and rain was beginning to fall when one she-wolf laid down to rest in a grey-skied meadow. A baby was born and was named Greely, which means grey meadow. Greely was a quite adventurous pup, and loved to play fight. His most prized toy was his copper and ebony colored tail armor. The pack traveled a lot, and moved from place to place searching for food and shelter. One day, when Greely was older, and about 2 years old, the pack began to wander off. Greely had forgotten his tail armor! He ran back towards the cave where the pack had been staying. By the time he reached the cave, he was panting. By the time he found his tail armor, the pack was gone. Greely traveled in solitary for years, and that is when he found his power. One day, while he was lapping up water, Greely heard sad, upsetting cries. He tracked the sound to a young Artic wolf, who had a deep bleeding gash on her back.She told Greely all about herself. Her name was Clarisse, and she was the same age as Greely. Soon enough, young pups were born, and their names were Ashley and Torros. They were very playful. One day while Greely was off chasing phantoms, Ashley, (or Ashes) And Torros decided to play tag. They chased each other around great oaks, pines and even shops. Ashes and Torros had inherited Greely’s shadow traveling power, and loved to play with it. Ashes was chasing Torros, when suddenly they both knocked into a hard wall. Confused, for it appeared as though nothing was there,The pair tried to run into it again. It was solid. They shadow traveled into the shop, which was dark and only illuminated by torches. They cowered in fear, but then felt a wisker-like tickling sensation brush over them. Feathers. They heard a sharp crow. Suddenly the whole room lit up. A tall heron stood over them. “Hello” She whispered. Her voice sounded like a gushing waterfall. She smiled at them. “Come young pups. No need to fear. I will show you something not many Jamaasians have seen before.” “Jamaasians?” Questioned Torros. “ Who are the Jamaasians?” The heron smiled. “ First of all, my name is Mira. I am goddess of the sky, and creator of the phantoms.” “You created the phantoms?” Cried Ashley. “ Our brave father has to risk his life because of you! Why would you create such an evil force?” Mira replied, “ I did not mean to. My tears formed the beasts.” “Lets get to the point” said Torros.” Who are the Jamaasians?” Mira waved her wing.” Follow me” Everything went black. Suddenly, Ashley and Torros were in a large field. “This,” said Mira “Is Jamaa.” Torros laughed. “This is Jamaa?” “This is Jamaa.Your brave father is working hard to save this land. Because one day, millions of Jamaasians will thrive here. But if we do not work hard to save it now, it will be forever gone.” Suddenly they were all back in the shop. “ Remember all you have learned today.” Instructed Mira. Then she disappeared. “ Ashley! Torros!” Clarrise cried. There were tears in her eyes. “Yes Mommy?” Called the kids. “ Come here. Now.” When they reached their mom, they found Greely. His back was bleeding. He groaned. Clarisse explained,” A phantom. It stung him. Phantom waves are much more powerful then any lightning bolt.”

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    1. Years later, Torros was walking along a creek when he heard a familiar voice. Mira appeared. “Torros...” She whispered. “Torros, come with me.” He had no choice. Soon enough, he was in a bustling street. “Your father.” she said. “Greely. He is of the highly respected form. He was announced an Alpha for his work. An Alpha, you know not of the honors.” They walked through the township. They walked by a small bunny. He was a baby, but it was obvious he was less fortunute. How is it, Torros thought, that artic wolves are striding around with designer skirts while some animals have to suffer. Mira smiled at him. “I have a gift for you.” she said. “I will grant you any wish.” Torros thought hard. He thought about the poor bunny. “I wish there was a currency, a very great currency that could buy the poor items that make the poor not as poor. Call them diamonds, after my father’s birthstone!” “ How will we get so many of the rare stones?” Questioned Mira. “We will grow them on small bushes called Blumberry bushes. We will distribute them. Oh it will be great Mira! Thank You! Thank You!!!” Mira smiled. “ I am sure the Jamaasians will appreciate it.” With a whisk of her wing,
      a dome shaped temple-like building appeared. They stepped inside. A clean marble statue of Torros stood. He was in a graceful poze, his leg raised. On the beautiful wooden doors stood a clean etching of Zios. “What is that?” asked Torros. “It is the creator of me. Zios. The most mighty of them all. He used to be my idol. I had feelings for him. When he left, my tears created the phantoms. “
      Years later, the Alphas herded into the Diamond Shoppe. Phantoms had invaded it, and the Alphas chased them down. The battle lasted several days. But by the time the Phantoms died out, many cracks were in the statue. But after a long time, they were mainly fixed. After thousands of years, the diamond shop finally opened. Jamaasians could become artic wolves just like Clarisse.
      The Diamond Shoppe was finally opened. And even after his passing, Torros never forgot the young bunny, who was now a warrior in the Alpha Clan. The Diamond Shoppe, which was created in a long, interesting and historical way was a solution for everyone.

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    2. ITS NOT A GREAT STORY!!!!! ITS AN AWSOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!

      -Meowcats1228

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    3. This is not a real story. There is no evidence, even if you are a "animal jam expert." Some people have been playing ever since AJ started here. If you wanted to make a entertaining story, please use at least quotation marks and right grammar. Also, state that it's fake, it obviously is. Please don't think I don't like you, it has a great plot, actually. :D

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    4. Here's a little story I made up. One night, The female alpha of the Pack of forgotten rivers Laid down beneath the moonlight. Ten minutes later, six beautiful pups were born. Half were boys, the other half girls. The eldest male pup was named River, as he rolled into a river and opened his eyes. The eldest female pup was named sunlight, as when the sun rose, she first opened her eyes. The middle male pup was named shadow, as he squirmed into the shadows just before opening his eyes. The middle female pup was named Daisy, as she rolled into a field of daises before opening her eyes. The youngest male pup was named crow, as when a crow landed on a branch in front of him, he opened his eyes. The youngest female pup was named night, as she opened her eyes immediately and stared at the moon. She was a blind pup, and was the only pup out of the other Five who inherited her father's (Moonlight, the male alpha of the pack ) silky black coat, the other pups all had they're mother's ( dawn ) golden coat. I'll make a part Two if it gets enough requests!!!!!!! - dog36147

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    5. 4 more requests and part 2 everybody!!

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    6. I got a greely story! There was a arctic wolf named Audrey and one night she had eight pups, and one was a regular wolf, his name was greely. His dad known as howls died, greely killed his first phantom when he was two THE END POOP HEADS

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  2. Awesome stories you guys! I lov them both :D

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  3. ibp911, that is not the story. I saw NO records of greely beening married, an having kids. the diamond shop was not made by torros he is not real. cloudclaws, ;-) that is GOT TO BE REAL!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    1. I think your right its not real at all

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    2. and btw i got the idea from ibp911 give ibp911 da credit, not meh

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  4. were did you get all this information or did you just make it up?

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  5. I did not make it up I am an animal jam expert.

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    1. AJ IS MY LIFE IM GREELYS DAUGHTER YOUR POOP HEADS

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  6. I did not make it up, OK?!

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  7. i have a greely story once there was a baby wolf named greely and 18 years later he was evil a phantom got him so that gold thing was destored by greely but then a fox came greely shocked the fox but then he was good again but he had DARK MAGIC and thats the story

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  8. this is the guy who made up the short evil greely story i just want to say i dont like that story! i love it!

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    1. DAD NOOO WHY YOU SHOULD HAVE STOPPED THE VOLCANO AND CAME WITH ME CRIES WHY WHY OHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPPO

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  9. i made a story too. but its kind of like a ending twist. There where once a borned pup in a city, her name was mythical because something good always happens to her or the person taking care of her. when she was a little pup, something happened in her life time, a phantom portal was opened up to her city and to jamaa. slowly the phantoms zapped and destroyed her city she ran as fast as she could and ran into the phantom portal, not knowing what it would do. She was getting zapped everywhere in the portal she managed to survive and get through to jamaa, when she got there she could no longer move. Greely with a sharp vision was the first to spot the helpless pup in danger while the phantoms stormed jamaa, he ran towards the pup and dodged the phantoms quickly, he picked up the pup while still running, and got her to a shelter with some other jammers while he fought out to help jamaa, the other little wolf pups just stared at her in the shelter because they knew she was not from this world and neither was she a wolf. She was a dog, the alphas began to fight the phantom queen together and they managed to destroy the phantom queen with the magic they had within them, but the phantom king was in rage for what they did. Soon jamaa was back in shape, while greely he just stared at the little pup he too, knew she was no wolf, but he admired how she took care of the wolf pup bullies. she would say "sure i'm a dog, but it still means i'm your blood, and because where different does not mean someone has the right to mistreat someone!" soon greely found she had this type of lightning power from the portal and the lightning bolts bashing her, because of this she came immune to it, and she behold the power. greely knew she could never handle this type of power, and it would over come. So he had to adopt her, and teach her to control her powers. she soon developed greely's dark shadow powers, but hid it from greely. soon she was in teen hood, and greely respected her as just as any of the other jammers in jamaa. This made mythical sad, she thought he did not care, so she went to the lake to play. Soon she saw something... something of a dark blurry thing in the sky. It begin clear one it got closer that it was the phantom king for revenge.. she thought if she was managed to

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    1. defeat this phantom king that attacked jamaa and her city when she was a pup would make greely proud. at the same time the phantom king heard her fears which could allow him to overcome her, so he blasted a big amount of lightning at the teen wolf, at mythical striked too with great force, she was quickly defeated and with that amount of power blasted her into a tree, she began to whimper loud, graham the alpha who heard the teen jammer through his invention he just made, used his power to teleport to the poor jammer, and saw the phantom king. He gasped very loud, the phantom king then striked the monkey, graham 2 feet of the ground for a phew seconds the alpha monkey then use his magic to stop the phantom king, but only for a short time.. mythical who just woke up saw greely running towards the phantom king in deep rage, and at top speed leaped through the air quickly, and missed every shot the phantom king had. Greely then striked the phantom king with his dark shadowy powers which made the phantom king leave, greely slowly stared at mythical, he daughter with great disapointment, mythical, and the alphas knew that greely's adopted daughter would not survive the damage the phantom king done. Indeed that mythical would of never given the phantom the slightest damage. Mythcial died a slow painful death talking to her father, and because of this grew huge sadness, pain, sorrow, and rage in greely. He promised he would get back from the phantom king, and the alphas who knew of mythical never told anyone about mythical's death again because it would give sorrow, and sadness. greely planned things with the phantoms. He was to pretend to be on the phantoms side, and turn on them, but the alphas thought that from greely's inferno to the search of greely, but he never said the reason, or the cause of why he did this. Also do know its a story i made up its not the real story.

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    2. BUDDY ME ON AJ IM LEMUR2010

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  10. anyway its a story i made up please friend me on animal jam im roronoa1

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    1. hey guys this is roronoa1 again, ok i made the second story to the story i made of greely's daughter. We know form last story greely was full of sorrow from his dead daughter, but something weird was happening.. it was mira's soul spirit that made mythical's eyes rise "where am i am i in heaven?" "you may say that, i'm mira the great goddess, and i have grant you another life for the courage, you have done." said mira that was where mythical was too. "wait your mira... i thought it was a fake story..."

      "indeed its not, i have chosen you to change greely your father, he has turned evil because of your death, and i need you to turn him back, with out the seven alphas, violence will happen." mira began to speak. "i will give you faith, wise, and the power you once had to show your father your still alive, But you must not show anyone your true power, only to greely, and once that has happened. I chosen you to fight along side with your father against the phantom king." "but i will only die again from the phantom king! i have no luck mira." "yes, but when i grant you powers anything can be possible." as she end that with a faithful sentence she put mythical back on jamaa alive, and well. Chapter 2 Fighting. As soon as mythical got to jamaa everyone stared at her with shock, Graham's eyes widened and ran towards mythical, soon the other alphas just slowly walked up to mythical, peck the bunny alpha asked "i thought you died how did you survive?" the tiger alpha began to say "she must had the power of mira in order to revive!" "indeed, she is alive." poked the koala, "i am so glad your alive, i think we should celebrate." "first we must know if mythical really did survive, or possesed the power." said the koala. "It is true mira let me live for one reason that i can not say, where is my father?" liza spoke up "he has turned evil, we found information of paper that was left over formt he volcano, i am sorry." "mira wants me to see him for a reason."

      "if you insist." said liza. Liza spoke to the other alphas that it would be great danger with the other alphas followed so she, only came along with mythical to the volcano. Chapter 3 Finding greely. "this is far as i can take you, the phantoms have taken the rest of the volcano place." "i cant do it liza, trust me." liza knew she would not fail this time, so she went back to jamaa. mythical sneaked past the phantoms 4 times, but was spotted. She said, "Take me to your leader." and the phantoms took her in. To her surprise greely, was the phantom king now. "a jammer? let her go to jamaa, we have better plans." he spoke in phantom language. the phantoms began to take mythical out of the volcano when said yelled to greely, "DAD NO!!" at that saying, everything stopped. The phantoms stopped greely stopped.

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    2. Greely's eyes widened, "no, your just a jammer who looks like my daughter leave me at once!" "no father please listen! mira saved me im real!" at that moment she used her dark powers, and lightning to stun the phantoms. "it really is..." greely spoke. "please father! mira sent me to turn you good again, you dont have to be this you can change! whatever happened to that good father of my child hood? what ever happened to being the alpha of jamaa?" "thats enough, im thru with you." by that he got up from his throne, and walked slowly towards mythical, and whispered something,mythical smiled a bit to understand what he said. Greely then summoned the actual phantom king that was dethroned, "i have given you this jammer for a sacrifice, and i ask of you to destroy jamaa!" the phantom king rised up to mythical, and sent a electric bolt at her, she remembered what greely said whispering "Dont worry im not evil. Wait for the time to strike." and with that mythical dodged the attack like greely, they both striked the phantom king with there own powers enough to kill thousands of phantoms. the phantom lost his power, but still managed to fight. The Phantom king sent 4 weak lightning bolts at the two, and the phantoms began to swarm them. Greely used his dark magic to move all the phantoms in the way of the lightning bolts, and mythical used her magic to shield her, and his father just in case. All the phantoms where wiped out, back at jamaa she knew they would need the alphas help, so she got the alphas to get there in time to use all there magic together like the alphas should. "Liza what are you, and the other alphas doing here?" said greely, one of the alphas spoke up to say, "if someone is to defeat a phantom king, where here for back up, and besides we deal with things together!" and for the first time greely smiled. All the alphas and mythical defeated the phantom king with there own powers, and they all came home to jamaa safely. With the phantoms no longer to deal with they would have a happy life. and greely, and mythical could finally spend time with each other as family. THE END!!!!! :D -roronoa1

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  11. greely is real but we dont know if he died stoping the volcano
    but one thing is for shure he is a hero.-olivia

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  13. thx guys i hope you loved my own virtual story snow claws was the best, -roronoa1

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  14. Before I EVER make a shaman story, I will get the most info on Greely. I will ask:
    1. Was Greely married?
    2. Did he have children?
    3.What was his pack's name?
    4.Did he know Zios before Zios died?
    -tigerfort

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  15. if I ever wright a greely story, I need most info POSSIBLE pleaes answer in comments = ^.^ =

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    1. Write. :D This is great. If you do make one, please tell us all. I'll be glad to read it.

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  16. I loved it are you gonna keep writing its so good!

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  17. I've made my own blog!!!! Here is the link: http://Animal-Jam-Alphas.wikia.com/wiki/Animal_Jam_Alphas_wiki

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  18. Greely actually DIDN'T die in the volcano, now that the Search for Greely came out, but I LOVE your story of Greely, cloudclaws!

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  19. ya so that is wat i believe that no one no's about greely but the ppl who made this game and if there was prof wouldn't every one no greely is alive.but he was brave to do that saving us from a volcano THAT WAS JUST WOW AND SAD SO IMOTIONAL LOSING GREELY!!!!!!!!!!

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  20. the alpha didnt know this but the phantom king can shiftshap and they lied about the phantoms in the forerst

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  21. the alpha didnt know this but the phantom king can shiftshap and they lied about the phantoms in the forerst

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  22. Well I like Greely sometimes when i play aj i act like his daughter but that was an great story quite interesting

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  23. Well you guyz think thats cool listen to this story i made it up

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