Monday, 24 November 2014

Captain Melville's Journey - Part one

Hey everyone! ^-^
I have another story for you, this time it's about Captain Melville. AJHQ never showed us what he looked like and who he is, so this is my idea of him.

Chapter one
The sky was sunny and filled with warmth. Melville was on a golden beach which had rocky cliffs everywhere. He didn't know where it was, but he felt safe, as if he belonged here instead of the cold polar regions. But the beach was fading around him, and the warmth was slowly turning into cold. "No!" Shouted Melville. He didn't want to leave!

His eyes flickered open. He was back in the huge, icy cave where all the seals slept. The sky was dark and blue. In front of him was his sister, Juniper who had a light grey pelt dappled with darker patches.
"Are you okay?" She asked, "You where talking in your sleep."

Melville's eyes where glassy and expressionless, then he shook his head and replied, "Yes, fine."
He turned his head away, and then whispered "Juniper, we need to talk."
They settled in another small cave, a little farther right to the big one.

"I just feel like us seals don't belong here . ." He begun.
"What do you mean by that?" Juniper replied.
Melville begun to explain.
"You know, there's all sorts of dangers here like hunters and killer whales. And it's getting worse. The ice is melting more and more each year, and out territory is getting smaller. In the past days, i have been having dreams where im at this beach . . and i feel safe there as if there's no more danger."

Juniper looked at him in amazement. Then she said: "I have been having the same dream! I thought it was nothing but . ."
"Then i must leave." Melville interrupted.
"What?! You can't do that!" Juniper exclaimed.

"You don't know i feel! I have to, alone. Just tell everyone i left, that's all."
 Juniper nodded her head slowly, her eyes filling with tears. "Goodbye. You know, a small part of me understands why you would want to leave."
Both touched noses, and Melville slowly made his way to the shore, leaping into the water.
More coming soon!
P.S Sorry it's so short, i don't have enough time right now. D:


  1. Nice story, keep up the good work! Guess what? THE STRING OF LEAVES IS BACK FOR NONMEMBERS!!!!!!! : )


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